And isn’t that fun not knowing just letting the story unfold and they tell you until a certain point when you get it round them up have a talk with them. Tell him they gotta get their ducks in a row or as my neighbor would say they’re shit in a row
Poor Felix! What did he do?! LOL Though, I really have no idea where any characters will end up, and only vague ideas of how I’d like the story to go for Elias and Mark. So, who knows. Felix could go in any direction as the story progresses. It’s fun, yet terrifying, to discover the story only a week or two ahead of you and others who are reading it. I HOPE Felix stays good, because he’s tons of fun, but we shall see.
I’m sure anyone’s imagination would be great if they spent all day long actively running movies through their head of their stories. Sometimes it continues in my dreams too if I’m really in the trenches. Just wrote down notes for a random scene when I woke up this morning. Not for this story, but could be added to any story really. Let’s just say that I’m now uncomfortably aware of what it would feel like to drown from that dream. lol
I’m not sure my mind is capable of shutting off the imagination stream, actually, now that I think about it…
As far as I know, there isn’t choices for font. It auto changes to the default substack font when I past it in from my google doc. Looks the same as the previous chapter to me.
It may be an eccentric playlist in the end. hahaha There’s one song coming up in 2 chapters that I chose purely for how ridiculous it is.
I can set the fonts for my publication, including the main body text, and on my end the other chapters still use a serif font. So either something changed somewhere, or my browser has chosen chaos.
Also, please send a link if you assemble us a little playlist!
Great twist with the angel, and I can’t wait for the next chapter. This story is so great!
Thanks! I’m glad you liked it. I’m not usually one for putting anything that could be considered sexy in my stories, so the angel was a big risk. lol
We all like a little spice every now and again! 🙃
Well that’s good, because spice just happens to find Elias. 😂
And Mark!
Did you read my story Secret Recipe?
Just read it and commented. :D
Thank you!
I love this story. Your imagination is amazing. Felix is such a great addition. I don’t trust him though.
And isn’t that fun not knowing just letting the story unfold and they tell you until a certain point when you get it round them up have a talk with them. Tell him they gotta get their ducks in a row or as my neighbor would say they’re shit in a row
That’s what the second draft is for. haha
“Ok, you’ve had your fun. Now to clean up this mess you’ve made of yourselves.”
Poor Felix! What did he do?! LOL Though, I really have no idea where any characters will end up, and only vague ideas of how I’d like the story to go for Elias and Mark. So, who knows. Felix could go in any direction as the story progresses. It’s fun, yet terrifying, to discover the story only a week or two ahead of you and others who are reading it. I HOPE Felix stays good, because he’s tons of fun, but we shall see.
I’m sure anyone’s imagination would be great if they spent all day long actively running movies through their head of their stories. Sometimes it continues in my dreams too if I’m really in the trenches. Just wrote down notes for a random scene when I woke up this morning. Not for this story, but could be added to any story really. Let’s just say that I’m now uncomfortably aware of what it would feel like to drown from that dream. lol
I’m not sure my mind is capable of shutting off the imagination stream, actually, now that I think about it…
I'm really loving this story!! It's like "Lethal Weapon" in space.
I don’t think I’ve seen Lethal Weapon since the 90s. Amazing throwback.
Your story has such great repartee between the characters - for whatever reason it reminded me of L.W. III, the one with Joe Pesci.
Am I convinced that we need an official companion playlist with all the songs? Yes. Yes, I am.
Slightly unrelated, but is there a reason the body text has suddenly gone sans-serif, or is my browser making creative decisions without permission?
As far as I know, there isn’t choices for font. It auto changes to the default substack font when I past it in from my google doc. Looks the same as the previous chapter to me.
It may be an eccentric playlist in the end. hahaha There’s one song coming up in 2 chapters that I chose purely for how ridiculous it is.
… What are these reply rules I’m seeing? lol
I can set the fonts for my publication, including the main body text, and on my end the other chapters still use a serif font. So either something changed somewhere, or my browser has chosen chaos.
Also, please send a link if you assemble us a little playlist!
Reply rules? I actually did a Note on that recently https://substack.com/@hottakesoncinema/note/c-270025354
I looked again, and there are no font options on my editor at all. Send me a DM with a picture of yours or something.
Will do!